Also start with a bite. And pleasure should be part of the poem or the major theme. Here's what I got....
The Anthropocene
In the beginning was the serpent, the apple and then the bite.
And it was then God began again the work.
The evening and the morning were the first day.
God said, Let us unmake man and woman of our image, no longer after our likeness, no longer be there pleasure or the bearing of fruit.
The evening and the morning were the second day.
And then God said, This is good.
And God said, Let the waters that brought forth abundantly
the moving creature that hath life be they now greatly overfished and lifeless.
The evening and the morning were the third day.
And God said, Let no longer be there lights in the firmament of the heaven to divide the day
from the night.
The evening and the morning were the fourth day.
And God said, Let the waters under the heaven be gathered together unto no place.
The evening and the morning were the fifth day.
And God said, Let there no longer be a firmament in the midst of the waters, and let it not divide the waters from the waters.
The evening and the morning were the sixth day.
And in the end darkness was upon the face of the deep. And the Spirit of God did not move at all upon the face of the waters.
Thus ended the seventh and final day.
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