This form is driven by two initiating lines, the first row and the left column. There were also five words supplied to drive the tone of the poem: iron, prison, rigidity, resigned (original prompt was resignation), elevation. The poem can be read both horizontally and vertically. The trick was to attempt to get meaning in all lines though not necessarily through traditional syntax.
I | walked | the | rail | lines at | night |
want | is | always | iron | never | rigidity |
to | air | human | clang | never | blurs |
find | a | centre | against | never | smudges |
the | centre | of | my | never | shifts |
way | too | many | opportunities | never | elevate |
out | inherited | fights | never | finds | |
of | problems | resigned | never | no | |
this | problem? | of | never | way | |
prison | no! | stars | no light | in | ever |
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